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207 “Rituals and ceremonies help define a culture. Without them, societies or groups of people have a diminished sense of who they are.”
典礼和仪式有助于确立一种文化，否则人们的社会或群体的角色归属感削弱。
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In general, I agree with the assertion that rituals and ceremonies can help for a society or group of people to retain their sense of culture identity, for rituals and ceremonies play a [...]

161 “In this age of intensive media coverage, it is no longer possible for a society to regard any woman or man as a hero. The reputation of anyone who is subjected to media scrutiny will eventually be diminished.”
在媒体铺天盖地的年代，不可能树立英雄。任何人在媒体的“审视”下都会名声扫地。
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In general, I agree with the assertion that intense media scrutiny nearly diminish the reputation of [...]

51. “Education will be truly effective only when it is specifically designed to meet the individual needs and interests of each student.”
教育只有被专门设计来满足每一个学生个人需求和兴趣的时候才是真正有效率的。
这是大牛给修改后的,比原来那篇干增色不少.
0. The speaker assert that only when it is specifically designed to meet the individual needs and interests of each student will education be truly effective. I concede that education should ,at least, try [...]

51. “Education will be truly effective only when it is specifically designed to meet the individual needs and interests of each student.”
教育只有被专门设计来满足每一个学生个人需求和兴趣的时候才是真正有效率的。
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(the final modified article : http://yunshu.bokewan.com/?p=498)
0. The speaker assert that only when it is specifically designed to meet the individual needs and interests of each student will education be truly effective. [...]